(Without Focusing on the Nerfs) How Can I Build MagNB Next Patch PVP?

So Far I had this idea:


I wanted to use this with Crafty Alfiq as the jewelry and weapon set, but I couldn't test it because at this time crafty is not on the build editor. With maybe a frost staff if not then all impen and lightning staff for the AoE DoTS.
Am I going in the right direction? I just want to continue playing Nightblade and do well in PVP.

Please post suggestions and feedback. Also, I don't want this thread getting negative I know it looks bad right now, but there has to be something I can do to play Nightblade.
Also Im noob so please go easy.